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I Heard Your Words

I heard your words And not one to my liking On a cool fall day, you say I have to leave You are taking me to a deserted island to spend my last days alone To fend for myself if only I can You say I can only take three things I don't like your tone Like a fog horn you sound Telling me I am to be put out Reminding me of the tale of the Eskimo tribe who put their elderly on floating ice to let them die or fall prey to wild animals You say you will let me carry three things from our wordly possessions And none of my family whom I hold dear You say I can not carry the Crepe Myrtle ablaze like a fireball lighted by Autumn's angular sun You say I can not carry a Georgia Pine whose last year's needles have turned Amber You say I can not carry the Pear Tree still laden with ripening pears You say I can not carry the Red Bud, nor the Yellow Maple, nor a Ginko whose leaves have refused to turn gold You say I can carry only three things 'pon this last journey You say I can not carry the Autumn breeze which cools the trees You say I can not carry the Mockingbird nor the Red Cardinal Only three things 'pon my journey I have my faith, my imagination, and photos stored in memory that you can not~ no~ never ever take away.... On this trip I will take my Bible, my magical suit case and tackle box... Later the rest of the story Finis' Contest: What Would You Take? Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton Written: October 23, 2013

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Date: 11/11/2013 3:39:00 PM
Take me with you, Sara, old friend. Love this one mucho. congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 11/7/2013 9:50:00 AM
Sara, Cheers on your winning poem...... SKAT LOVE :)
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Date: 11/6/2013 7:42:00 PM
Sara , nicely done.... congrats in Shadow's contest.... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 11/4/2013 11:20:00 AM
Wow ! There is much to learn from you.. wonderful , amazing poem . Excellent win !
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Date: 11/4/2013 11:06:00 AM
a grand winner indeed...an excellent piece!! congratulations on your win friend Sara. Cheers!!!! :)
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Date: 11/4/2013 10:33:00 AM
Geez, no wonder you scooped the top prize with this write. This is good poetry, Sara. Congratulations and well-done with this superb piece. Licia :-)
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Date: 11/4/2013 9:31:00 AM
a well-defined piece, sara.. sweet congrats on your win!..:) huggs
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Date: 11/4/2013 4:11:00 AM
Many congratulations Sara another fine win well done xx
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Date: 11/3/2013 8:10:00 PM
congrats on your win! much deserved!!! Blessings, Stacey
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Date: 11/3/2013 7:17:00 PM
Well done Sara, Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest. Take care, Richard
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Date: 11/3/2013 6:08:00 PM
wow...love the way you penned this one Sara...very well crafted, congrats on your first place win :) hugs
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Date: 11/3/2013 5:25:00 PM
You went way beyond my wildest expectation. Congratulations on a truly magnificent poem.
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Date: 11/3/2013 4:58:00 PM
congrats on your win Sara
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Date: 11/3/2013 4:50:00 PM
Oh Sara..I'm so glad to see your wonderful poem here on top...well deserved....congratulations
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Date: 11/3/2013 4:37:00 PM
congrats Sara cant wait to read the rest....Seren
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Date: 11/3/2013 2:04:00 PM
congrats on win Sara with this enchanting poem
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Date: 10/25/2013 7:29:00 AM
Great write Sara. I sincerely enjoyed IT. Thanks for sharing with me. JM
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Date: 10/24/2013 11:08:00 PM
Real great imagination and scope on the theme here Sara; hope you achieve good results in that contest..!
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Date: 10/24/2013 1:56:00 PM
Fine very fine what you will take and what no one can take from you. I loved last three lines what you will take at your choice. Good luck. Loved always, my lovely friend, bl
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Date: 10/24/2013 12:37:00 PM
enjoyed how you took this theme and made it your own with such powerful display of will, sara.. yes, the three things you shall take will make life more endearing... just awesome!..:) huggs
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Date: 10/24/2013 11:01:00 AM
You are a wonderful poet Sara,, and this just as to add to your diversity,, amazing poetry sure will do very well in Shadows contest...
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Date: 10/24/2013 10:44:00 AM
I think you just won yourself a contest Sarah...eitherway this is eexcellent....
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Date: 10/24/2013 8:34:00 AM
Excellent. A significant piece of write. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 10/23/2013 9:40:00 PM
wow, this is an EXCELLENT way to do that contest. Wish I had thought of such an incredible idea!!!
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Date: 10/23/2013 9:35:00 PM
Very spirtual write I can relate to what you were trying to say in this write, the emotional expression quite beautiful. also thank you for your comments on my write.
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