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I Heard I Might Find a Poet Here

I was just sitting there writing when I saw her stroll in, I wasn’t alone, all eyes followed those curves sashaying as if she owned the place and maybe she did. . . if a heart can skip a beat, mine did a somersault. Obviously cut from a finer cloth than these eight dollar trousers ever found in their pockets, the fit much better too, a warm hug on a cold December day lingering in the moment She sat down at the crescent shaped bar, ordered a martini, neat, pulled a crisp twenty from her clutch and brushed a few stray brunette hairs from her face, the mirror behind the bar happily reflecting her beauty Raising the drink to her ruby red lips I found myself wishing I were that glass, smeared in her favorite shade, kissed by a sighing sip, caressed by porcelain fingers wiping sweat from a glistening neck A jewel in this dingy joint, shimmering in the dusty haze, breathing some class into this oblong shadow that had seen better days, but none like this, like her. She was out of place like fine wine in a shot glass . . . but didn’t seem to care She lifted a cigarette to her mouth, I was quick with a match, watching as tobacco embers flared and smoke rose upward, swirling about freeform. Putting her lips together she blew out the flame with a whisper of breath that made me weak in the knees, “Thank you.” I stared, forgetting the spent match I held between my fingers, tongue tied or mesmerized, take your pick, both answers are correct. “You’re welcome”, I stuttered like a school boy in braces, “new around here?” “Kind of”, her voice as chiffon is soft, “I heard I might find a poet here . . . ” To be continued . . . Please check out parts 2 and 3 if you get a chance.

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Date: 10/30/2018 5:28:00 AM
'smeared in her favorite shade, kissed by a sighing sip' - I think we drink from the same book. I thought I'd come here to see how you started, but I am in awe, for this is spectacular. Wow! Well done!
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Lifes' Tapestry
Date: 10/30/2018 9:03:00 AM
I shall read them soon... always interested :) You Sir, have my attention.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/30/2018 7:51:00 AM
Thanks so very much my friend. I am glad you liked this, it is one of my favorite pieces. There are two more parts to this if you are interested...the story continues.
Date: 4/25/2017 1:16:00 PM
Woah. I am so drawn in. Poetry is storytelling, I will be sure to check out part 2 and 3. I love this, you have talent.
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Chris Green
Date: 4/25/2017 1:20:00 PM
Wow, it is so cool you found this one Iris. This has to be one of my personal favorites that I have written. I couldn't be more happy you enjoyed this one. It was kind of my take on a Mickey Spillane feel.
Date: 4/25/2017 1:15:00 PM
Woah. I am so drawn in. Poetry is storytelling, I will be sure to check out part 2 and 3. I love this, you have talent.
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Date: 11/11/2016 12:29:00 AM
I think I did find a poet in you Chris. Great poem. I could feel the emotion. Keep them coming
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Chris Green
Date: 11/11/2016 6:26:00 AM
Thanks you so very much Brenda. I am glad you liked my poem and felt those emotions. Parts 2 & 3 are posted if you'd care to read the continuation of this rendezvous, if you have time. I really enjoyed kind thoughts and truly do appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on my work.
Date: 11/5/2016 10:04:00 AM
Chris, congratulations on potw with this wonderful write ~
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Chris Green
Date: 11/5/2016 11:58:00 AM
Thank you Broken Wings for your wonderful comments. I am thrilled you liked this one. Parts 2&3 are posted if you'd like to read them
Date: 11/5/2016 5:13:00 AM
Suspense! The hypothesis was the last line. I kept waiting to see when the topic would be presented, but now it is to be in Part two. Well done and a 7,
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Chris Green
Date: 11/5/2016 11:56:00 AM
Thank you so very much Rainbow Promise for your kind words. I appreciate your visit. If you have time parts 2&3 are posted.
Date: 11/3/2016 9:40:00 AM
- A wonderful poem, Chris - Congratulation on your p.o.t.w. ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/3/2016 9:44:00 AM
Tank you so much Anne-Lise for your kind words.
Date: 11/1/2016 6:02:00 PM
Great story Chris can't wait for part 2. Congrats on POTW!!!!
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Chris Green
Date: 11/1/2016 6:05:00 PM
Thanks so very much Phil. Part 2 and 3 are out there on the site somewhere. I hope you find them and enjoy them like you did this one.
Date: 11/1/2016 4:04:00 PM
Congrats on the big honor Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/1/2016 4:55:00 PM
Thanks so much my friend.
Date: 10/31/2016 10:26:00 PM
Congratulations. This is a well deserved win. :)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/1/2016 6:01:00 AM
Thank you my friend.
Date: 10/31/2016 1:18:00 PM
Beautiful poem to be continued unless you weren't the only poet in the place.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/31/2016 1:21:00 PM
Thanks so very much Ralph. There are two more parts/chapters to this if you'd care to check them out as well.
Date: 10/31/2016 9:02:00 AM
Back to say HUGE CONGRATS Chris , well deserved!
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Chris Green
Date: 10/31/2016 1:20:00 PM
Thanks so much Paloma.
Date: 10/31/2016 5:58:00 AM
Hi Chris, I'm so happy to see you get such an honor. Congratulations on getting the poem of the week. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 10/31/2016 6:00:00 AM
Thanks so much my friend for bring a smile to me this morning.
Date: 10/30/2016 11:54:00 AM
Congratulations Chris on POTW. I wish they had put all 3 parts but I guess it was too long.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/31/2016 5:54:00 AM
Thanks so much Daniel for letting me know. I appreciate your kindness
Date: 10/26/2016 1:34:00 PM
I can hardly contain myself waiting for Part 2, your stories are nothing less than EPIC indeed!
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Chris Green
Date: 10/26/2016 2:18:00 PM
Thanks so very much Paloma, I am happy you liked this
Date: 10/24/2016 5:39:00 PM
Ok, I'm in. Where's the next chapter, Chris? Don't leave a guy hanging! You do realize this kind of thing only happens in books and poems. Lol Great half of a write! Lol
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Chris Green
Date: 10/25/2016 9:28:00 AM
Thanks so much Daniel, it can also happen in dreams too. :)
Date: 10/24/2016 2:29:00 PM
This is both beautiful and suspenseful, Chris. You always have a special way with your words. I look forward to the next part of this as well. :)
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Chris Green
Date: 10/24/2016 2:55:00 PM
Thank you so very much Heidi for always being so kind to me. I an happy you liked this one. I will be posting the next part soon, maybe tonight, maybe in the morning.
Date: 10/24/2016 1:10:00 PM
You are so good,so good at writing poetry...Publish a book..So I buy it...A fave.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/24/2016 2:15:00 PM
Thanks so very much Charmaine for all of your wonderful comments about my little poem. I appreciate everything you do and your thoughts I am so grateful for. I don't think I will be publishing any books in the near future, but if by some chance I do, I will let you know.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 10/24/2016 1:24:00 PM
Like a school boy in braces...Oh I found those boys kind of cool..back i my teens on school days...:)
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 10/24/2016 1:22:00 PM
Her voice as chiffon is soft...WoW...Wish I had thought of that :)
Date: 10/24/2016 11:35:00 AM
okay, you pulled me in, chris... grreat intro; what's next?. huggs
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Chris Green
Date: 10/24/2016 11:57:00 AM
I guess we will just have to see. :) Thanks so much Nette, glad this one pulled you in.
Date: 10/24/2016 11:05:00 AM
Way to strike up the conversation Chris...lol..seriously great imagery...you never know where one might find a jewel.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/24/2016 11:32:00 AM
Yep, you never know where something like that might just stroll in. :) Thanks so very much Tim
Date: 10/24/2016 11:04:00 AM
Hi Chris, Once again I must say your title alone "called" me. As I began to read I saw an amazing story unfold. It was like I was reading a good romance novel that I couldn't put down. I was drawn to every word. It had a great plot, that was alluring, Intriguing and mysterious. You described both characters very well. You are an outstanding story teller. I can't wait to read the next part. A without a doubt seven: -)Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 10/24/2016 11:34:00 AM
Thank you so much Alexis for this wonderful comment on my writing. I am so thrilled you enjoyed this, as I enjoyed writing it. I love getting lost in a scene like this, the hard part is leaving. :) I will post part two maybe later today.

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