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I Have Become a Predatory Great White Shark

I once was here, then in the blue ocean, I once was dry, then thrown into commotion. I had no clue, for I was in the complete dark, but I was becoming a GREAT WHITE SHARK! Just a wee baby was I at five feet in length, I have a dozen siblings all in great strength. I’m just a pup who swam away from his mother, trying to hide from prey with my little brother. Now I’ve grown fifteen feet long as I’m older, I’ve become more vicious and completely bolder. I can swim fifteen miles per hour with my dorsal fin, I’m top of the food chain as my speed always wins. I’ve become a predator expected to hunt food, but during the winter days I’m not in the mood. I really fear humans who fear me even more, for it is actually sea lions and small whales that I adore. I can’t believe the adrenaline rush that I need, as I rip apart marine animals for my feed. My agitation today became stronger than ever, as I went on my greatest and best endeavor. My torpedo shaped body and my stable tail, help me escape from a pack of killer whales. They tried to tip me over and become catatonic, it makes me fall asleep in a state of hypnotic. My life has never been better on this journey I embark, for I have become a predatory GREAT WHITE SHARK! I chose: Becoming a Great White Shark April 9, 2017

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Date: 5/26/2017 7:27:00 PM
Wow! How interesting, Laura Loo. You must have done some research for this one. Kudos and congrats!
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Date: 5/26/2017 10:26:00 AM
I enjoy poems that are informative and entertaining--like this one. Congrats on your win, Luloo! Janice
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Date: 4/30/2017 3:06:00 PM
Laura,this is a great poem you wrote.I have enjoyed it from the beginning to the end. Nice to meet you Laura.
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Date: 4/10/2017 7:22:00 AM
This is so good, Luloo! I have been fascinated by the Great White since "Jaws" came out! 7
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Lu Loo
Date: 4/10/2017 8:30:00 AM
me too! thank you Kim :)
Date: 4/9/2017 1:40:00 PM
You made me really feel this shark. I like your personification. I was identifying with him allegorically part of the way.
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Lu Loo
Date: 4/10/2017 8:30:00 AM
thank you Sunlite :)

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