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Below is the poem entitled I HATES MYSELF which was written by poet Amit Valmiki. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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When you were with me,
I was assuming myself like a prince.
When you were looking at me,
I started gazing in your eyes.
To see myself in you,
It was the only way in few.

When you were smiling at time,
I was compelled to hold my breath.
When you were talking to me,
I was hearing the magical sound.
To feel you around,
It was the only way I found.

But, when you were going back away from me,
My heart was crying with your yell within.
Today; when I come to know that you  are hating me,
I started hating myself….

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  1. Date: 11/2/2011 5:21:00 AM
    Thats sad!!

    Valmiki Avatar Amit Valmiki
    Date: 11/2/2011 5:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    yaa and this happened with me, its not just a poem,it,s my opened heart.