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I Found a Girlfriend

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Took me the breath of all my life A soul mate who could consume my heart wither a smile I found that Gothic girl after dark A little to late to consummate I lie in waiting with a dead round smile Empty eyes and a lot of guile I found a girlfriend even if late We lie together Frigid is our state

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/7/2023 1:48:00 PM

Well, this one is sad, scary and a little like Halloween. Creative for sure. Thanks for sharing this unique one with us. Sara K

Jan Allison

Date: 4/17/2016 2:05:00 PM

Gives I died in your arms tonight total new meaning lol - great to read this again lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 4/17/2016 11:42:00 AM

lol...just read my comment below

Tim Smith

Date: 4/17/2016 11:41:00 AM

lol...at least you found her

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 2/26/2015 10:30:00 AM

witty and funny buddy Art..:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/25/2015 6:02:00 PM

YOu are a so funny, Arthur. And what a great picture to go with it!!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/25/2015 9:36:00 PM

Thank you, I did put on my best suit!!!

Arlene Smith

Date: 2/25/2015 4:39:00 PM

That's what happens when we won't settle for less than perfection!! :-))) Love it!.. Hugs.. Arlene

Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/25/2015 9:35:00 PM

I'd settle for "breathing"

Meg Anderson

Date: 2/24/2015 6:37:00 PM

Ummm Arthur... I do think you will find that beautiful girl but hopefully before you look like that. Too funny! I love it!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/25/2015 9:35:00 PM

Thanks Meg you are certainly more optimistic than I !

Paul Callus

Date: 2/20/2015 12:59:00 PM

Love you black humour, Arthur; could turn out to be a bone-shattering experience! // paul

Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/25/2015 9:33:00 PM

LOL Paul good one!

Kelly Deschler

Date: 2/18/2015 10:51:00 PM

Well, it's better late than never, as they say! I really enjoyed the dark humor of this clever write. It makes me think of the film, "The Corpse Bride"... Fantastic poem, Arthur!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/19/2015 10:13:00 PM

Thanks Kelly, thats the same line I tell my credit card companies when they come a calling!

Cherl Dunn

Date: 2/18/2015 8:33:00 AM

Dear Arthur, This is a little macob amd sad my friend, the pic is great to the poem you've written though,cheri

Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/19/2015 10:11:00 PM

I wrote this to make people laugh, or laugh themselves to death!

Julia Ward

Date: 2/17/2015 8:07:00 AM

:D I have replied to your comments on my poem, "Nutella". Soup are still not sending notifications.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/19/2015 10:10:00 PM

I think things all fixed now!!! Hopefully!

Tim Smith

Date: 2/16/2015 10:58:00 PM

Habs win the Stanley Cup...this is a test..if they actually would have won the world would have ended

Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/19/2015 10:09:00 PM

The world will survive for another year then! LOL

Jan Allison

Date: 2/16/2015 12:39:00 PM

This made me giggle Arthur - this gives the saying 'romance is dead' a whole new meaning:-( Hugs Jan xx 7 xx

Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/19/2015 10:09:00 PM

LOL Jan, thanks!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/16/2015 8:16:00 AM

You kill me man! Judging by the picture that would make us twins! Does she have a sister?

Jan Allison
Date: 2/20/2015 4:10:00 AM

ha ha ha love the banter :-) Hugs Jan xxx

Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/19/2015 10:08:00 PM

Oh Richard, you are far too young and good looking to look anything like me. A sister you say? Well I might just try for her too, with the boner I now have!!!