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While drifting off to sleep this night, I felt your gentle hand caress my soul; And looking out my open window, Your sweet soft light shone on me. As hazy clouds drifted by, In a black velvet sky; A perfect golden moon, Silent and comforted I lay my head down. Your loveliness touches my very soul, So I press your beauty to my heart; And I close my weary eyes. _____________________________ May 2, 2015 Poetry/Verse/I Felt You Copyright Protected, ID 05-668-825-02 All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France Written for the contest, Its All About The Moon, sponsor, Skat, Judged 2015 Second Place

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Date: 6/10/2015 5:23:00 PM
This is so lovely Constance. Big kudos on your wonderful win! Aloha, Connie
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Date: 6/10/2015 2:40:00 PM
Beautiful as usual, Broken. Congratulations on your nice win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 6/10/2015 12:47:00 AM
Broken, thank you for drifting my mind. Love the poem. Congratulations, on your win. ThanXs for supporting my MooN contest. GoodNight **SKAT**
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Date: 5/24/2015 4:20:00 AM
Must have been a beautiful, magical experience. Love the photo you chose as well as the wording for this one. You seem to be a very versatile writer. These moments are priceless! Thanks for sharing these gems. I'm really enjoying reading your poetry tonight. Sorry I haven't visited more often! Always, Laura
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Date: 5/20/2015 3:08:00 PM
His creation reflects his glory! Love the way you presented the wonder of the moon.
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Date: 5/4/2015 10:09:00 AM
You've penned a very lovely verse about the moon my dear friend, Constance. I like it so much and so with the photos aobve. Thank you so much for sharing. Good luck in the contest. May I also have this chance to say thank you for your kind words in my blog. Have a blessed day! love lots and big hug, Leonora
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Date: 5/4/2015 8:51:00 AM
Beautiful! Love the picture as well.
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Date: 5/4/2015 7:54:00 AM
This is lovely, Constance. I love the smooth flow of the words and the picture you have chosen. :) Good luck in the contest. I've also read your POTD about your day. It's lovely and deserved to be POTD. Seems like you have a wonderful day filled with lots of activities. Some of them I share with you! ;)
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Date: 5/3/2015 12:40:00 PM
Wow again!!!! Constance, you are a master (mistress) of these poetic forms! I do not use that term often, btw, and not idly! Admire the authenticity of your feelings and depth of thought with which you write so beautifully and originality. . . Tom
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Date: 5/3/2015 12:30:00 PM
Simply wonderful!!!!! Very touched!
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Date: 5/3/2015 12:01:00 PM
Isn't it wonderful how much comfort we find in the moon's glow? As always, your poem is beautifully written and it gave me a peaceful feeling. Lovely! Carolyn
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Date: 5/3/2015 8:45:00 AM
A very beautiful poem. Beauty in every line...#7
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Date: 5/3/2015 12:52:00 AM
Very beautiful; best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 5/2/2015 11:19:00 PM
wow, now thats romantic!!!!!!
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