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Deer stroll in mists that disguise the ridges Creating a heavenly peace that soothes This feels spiritual, not religious And the heart does go where the spirit moves A bald eagle glides across naked limbs Tries to discover a new home in them The soft feel of this memorizes hymns Brings images of ancient Bethlehem Squirrels move about collecting acorns Saving up their winter’s staple today Hard work knows how to bring home the bacon Their toil reminds me of how we should pray Creatures of fall know how to show us all Our God’s world is vast so I feel so small September 27, 2019 Autumn sonnet Poetry Contest Sponsored by: John Hamilton

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Date: 10/10/2019 8:35:00 AM
loved it, Regina. Our smallness compared to the immensity of God's creation and yet never forget, He has a plan for each of us within this universe. Inspired me, loved it. Congrats on your poem and your placement.
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Date: 10/6/2019 4:26:00 PM
beautiful writing my friend...congratulations on your win! hugs and blessings :)
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Date: 10/6/2019 2:16:00 PM
Very nice Regina, congrats on a fine placement!
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Date: 9/29/2019 12:22:00 AM
Wow... imagery is fantastic.. as an artist I gorge in the beauty of God's creation of nature.. Good luck in the contest. Hugs
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Date: 9/28/2019 2:17:00 AM
God's world is magical, and we are but a glimmer in it. "Their toil reminds me of how we should pray" Nice one.
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