I Feel

Truth has the power to unlock under the carpet of lies hidden agendas covered up secrets Open and shut case proof behind scenes we are drip fed day by day by media controlled by its source rubbish Issues to corrupt peoples vision creating demons within reality and moral thinking a world can see as one body in a whole circle of good living souls

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Angeline Haikutwinkle

Date: 1/2/2017 9:16:00 PM

People have the power but they were fed with falsehoods and half truths, especially those who use overly decorative words in journalism.

Lyon Brave

Date: 12/29/2016 12:17:00 AM

I think the bleed tittle is very nice. I think your first stanza is the most powerful, but i lose interest when you use very obvious language like "media". It's just everyone says the media lies, and to be a poet is to say it a new way without being so obvious. That's what journalism is.

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 12/28/2016 4:34:00 PM

Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!This is a very powerful n' outstanding beautiful poem, you've have written here,my dearest friend Liam.I agree with you Liam.Enjoy it!Just dazzling!Very beautifully penned piece!Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.smiling.Just wondeful!I love it!A true glowing golden gem!Just amazingl!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're better in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:)) I hope you're healing more everyday.Wish you all best, be safe, get well, Liam.Wishing you n' your very dear family a Very Happy n' safe New Year, filled of lots of love hope joy peace, Liam!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/28/2016 1:52:00 PM

- Yes, the truth has power .... lying mask we always crack - A great poem, Liam - Best wishes and dear thoughts to you and yours :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)