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I Feel I feel weak... my arms heavy, my legs about to fall, as my face dropped, as my words began to stall. I feel cold... my lips turning blue, my hands starting to shake, as I got goose bumps, as my heart began to break. I feel confused... my head throbbing, my emotions in a twist, as I wonder "was it all a lie?" "was I another on her list?"

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Date: 4/22/2016 11:51:00 AM
Carmine, nicely penned. Glad to read your poem today. Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/21/2016 6:19:00 PM
I felt your out of body, no this can't be, description of heartbreak. Well written piece.
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