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I Fashioned a Brew

I fashioned a brew, a magical potion A rekindler of love, arousing emotion. I took essence of passion, my inner fire The beat of my heart, a cup of desire, I mixed them together with a portion of bliss But it's not for drinking, it awaits in a kiss.

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Gail Debole

Date: 2/6/2020 7:49:00 AM

Very nice!

Gary Smith
Date: 2/6/2020 8:26:00 AM

Thank you Gail. :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/31/2019 7:10:00 AM

Hello Gary Smith, a brew for a kiss, well I hope you get your kiss very soon. Have a nice day my friend.

Gary Smith
Date: 10/31/2019 7:25:00 AM

Thank you Darlene. :)

Mark Peterson

Date: 10/19/2019 7:09:00 PM

What an utterly engaging and romantic write. Awash in fresh and original emotion that swept right over me.

Gary Smith
Date: 10/20/2019 6:44:00 AM

Thank you Mark. :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/12/2019 8:09:00 PM

I love it. It's a wonderful entry. God bless you, Gina

Gary Smith
Date: 10/13/2019 6:15:00 AM

Thank you Gina. :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/12/2019 2:56:00 PM

Totally charming, Gary.

Gary Smith
Date: 10/12/2019 3:20:00 PM

Thank you Line. :)