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I Fall For This Payday

A dropper of winsome Fall in my cat-eye irises. I fall for this payday of solitude and promise. God’s mercy and grace in the Southern places of my soul, playfully sourced - Autumn in living color. I saunter the shadows of treetops, burns of yellows and reds - sardonyx swirls of prose amidst the evergreens. A cool cat on the prowl, not seeking a victim, but relationship in this season with open arms, ready for blessings like raindrops, showers from head to toe, a sea of leaves to sink the teeth into - life’s ebb and flow. 9/28/2022

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Date: 10/3/2022 9:43:00 AM
Kim, this poem overflows with beautiful fall images as you saunter through the glory of God's magnificent season named autumn. Each line has a gem to ponder. Congratulations on your win. Blessings of the season to you.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/3/2022 11:44:00 AM
Thank you, Sam! :)
Date: 9/30/2022 4:13:00 AM
this was the most creative of them all congrats dear Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/30/2022 4:42:00 AM
Thank you, Rose!
Date: 9/29/2022 10:49:00 PM
"payday of solitude and promise" - Great writing. Congratulations!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/30/2022 4:43:00 AM
Thank you, Christuraj! :)
Date: 9/28/2022 5:34:00 PM
ah, you not only fall into this pay day but you deserve it too dear Kim. Full of color and vibrancy, your signature dear poet. thank you for sharing the beauty. :) congrats !
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/29/2022 4:39:00 AM
Thank you so much, Rose <3
Date: 9/28/2022 5:30:00 PM
Quite a 'payday,' Kim. Quite a memorable poem. :) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/29/2022 4:38:00 AM
Thank you, Gershon! <3
Date: 9/28/2022 10:10:00 AM
- Lovely written ... I can see it ... - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/28/2022 11:04:00 AM
Thank you, sweet one!

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