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I Dropped a Tear In the Ocean

I sent a wish to the sky When the heart is weakening You will give anything a go I asked for an angel To hold my head when it hurt Who could love me so I lifted my head in the rain Harrowing to view To me it was beautiful and free I walked out into the dark night Into the small hours When nobody was looking for me I was given all my broken pieces And told to account for every part And throw them back into a sea of blue I dropped a tear in the ocean The tide threw me a lifeline The day I found you....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/28/2009 7:44:00 AM
lovely title, very describtive
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Date: 2/27/2009 8:49:00 PM
Awh Jo this is a very lovely poem - I just adored the ending - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/27/2009 6:23:00 PM
JO Very beautiful poem with a uplifting end I love the title too! Filled with emotion!
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Date: 2/27/2009 1:14:00 PM
Beautiful writing Miss Jo....I really liked this one...especially the part about accounting for all the broken pieces. Happy to hear that you found that angel to hold your head when it hurts!! Much love, Steve
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