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I Dreamed I Saw My Mother's Face

Gone for a fourth of a century And yet I can plainly see My mother's face in the mirror Looking back at me. The gray among the auburn, Those lines around the eyes. She shakes her head and whispers, "It should be no great surprise." There are marks that only sorrow Could have etched upon her face. Mother lived a very full life And she handled it with grace. "Mother dear," I say it gently, "It's so very hard to be, The one whose left, while others Have gone on ahead of me." Mother answered, "You had blessings, Thus you had so much to lose. Would you have chosen differently, Had you the chance to choose?" She went on, "Life's for the living, and You still have much to give. Looking forward, never backward, Is the only way to live." With my mother's tender chiding, I lost some of the pain. She confirmed it's not forever, I will see them all again. My mother's face was dimming, Her grey eyes merging into brown, The only face within the mirror, A reflection of my own. She had left me with the knowledge That she's never far away, And she'll help me with the morrows If I triumph o'er today. won hm

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/3/2010 8:39:00 PM
This is so nice, Joyce. So heartfelt and wise. congratulations, though belated. I have so much to do tonight,and one of my goals was to see winners of past contests.Luv, Andrea
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Date: 3/30/2010 7:28:00 PM
Mother is always next to God. Congrats for the win
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Date: 3/28/2010 10:43:00 AM
I can indentify with this dream of yours, Joyce...how often I've had a conversation with my mother in my mind...just has you have...and believe they are always with us in spirit. A lovely poem, Congratulations on your win! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 3/28/2010 3:19:00 AM
Heart warming dream- Congrats Joyce
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Date: 3/27/2010 8:37:00 PM
Big congrats Joyce on your winning poem in the I Dreamed contest.. a wonderful write and win for u to so enjoy on another trip to the winners circle..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 9/12/2009 11:09:00 PM
Joyce, we are indeed blessed by the legacy of our loving family. May we live each day with the same hope that your mother instilled in you! Blessings, Donna
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Date: 8/17/2009 6:03:00 PM
This was a touching tribute to a good mother. Thanks for your comments. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 8/17/2009 5:10:00 AM
Good morning Joyce. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today. I truly enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/17/2009 3:44:00 AM
This poem is fantastic, stunning. You captured an experience that's so moving, timeless. Thank you for sharing this. I can relate having lost my mother too...she shows up in me and mirror. I hope you enter this in a contest. It's a winner for sure.
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Date: 8/16/2009 8:58:00 PM
Hi Joyce! just got back from camping with my Daughters ages 19 & 21! now its cool to go camping with their Dad! imagine that!...just added this poem to my fav's list! I very much understand your feelings in this fine poem! super eloquence!!! love it! and thanks for comments while I was away! Joyce! love, jimbo
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Date: 8/16/2009 2:38:00 PM
Very good capture of mother in the mirror, when you can bring tears to the reader's eyes dear, and you did. Sincerely love Moses
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Date: 8/16/2009 8:36:00 AM
This a beauty! I agree...this should be entered into the contest. ..... I too, can look into a mirror, and see my mother's face...so I really felt this poem in my heart. Thanks for sharing it. Love, Carrie
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Date: 8/15/2009 7:07:00 PM
This is great writing..I hope you enter it in the contest..good work.
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