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I Dream of a Great and Distant Place

I dream of a great and distant place It is mine, only I hold the key There are many fears I have to face Meadow, temple, goddess of grace Wending brook, glittering tree I dream of a great and distant place It becomes vague, it is now a trace So very far, so very hard to see There are many fears I have to face Falling into my city's warm embrace Take me away, hear my plea I dream of a great and distance place To these enchanted thoughts I race From the staleness of now I flee There are many fears I have to face With a breath it will vanish, in a second erase Once more I feel a cold pull inside me I dream of a great and distant place There are many fears I have to face

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/21/2013 8:07:00 PM
Jeremy, Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) it has been an honor spotting your poem on the soups home page. Take care, and have yourself a lovely- GOODNIGHT **LINDA**
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Date: 5/18/2012 5:01:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Jeremy. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/16/2012 12:24:00 AM
A lovely dream...dream more Jeremy - well done poem. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/15/2012 2:25:00 PM
Good dream and well written poem. - oxox hug Anne-Lise
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