I Don'T Want You To Go

We danced. On that cold night with everyone watching. We didn't care. Didn't pay attention to their scoffing. We kissed. Lips intertwined in warmth. Dancing there in your arms, I felt all my pain go away. I just want this night to stay. A never-ending love that has captivated my soul. I just don't want you to ever go.

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Serenity D'Nae Montgomery

Date: 1/30/2009 8:59:00 AM

thanks for your comments...helps alot..This poem is about Josh :) lol sorry he's just so amazing..

Sandy Schermerhorn

Date: 1/21/2009 10:43:00 AM

Beautiful as usual Serenity, very well written and the flow was wonderful this poem here has captured true love in it's finest moment

Christopher Higgins

Date: 1/21/2009 8:31:00 AM

First the beauty in this write is portrayed so well. The poem flows with love, want and the need never to say goodbye. Wonderful work.