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I Don'T Want To See This Damn Fall

I don't want to see this damn fall I'm leaving before the leaves aren't green at all I can go to the desert and wait for winter to come I can live through the winter until spring has sprung I can stand the heat of summer and the desert sun but not the autumn that is to come

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/12/2011 1:09:00 PM

Yes, I could see that it was a play on words or metaphoric language but the fact that you used leaves aren't green at all...But of course that could be refering to money..Enjoyed reading..Sara

Elaine Miller

Date: 10/12/2011 11:13:00 AM

"fall". as in, headed for a fall. but i see now that's not how it's coming across! thank you for the comment.

Dana Smith

Date: 10/10/2011 6:43:00 PM

Fall is my favorite season:( but it makes me really depressed sometimes... I hope that's not why you don't want it to come... well, you can always take a road trip to Alaska or somewhere that's already Winter!