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i dont love you

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i dont love you

a drink from the bottle 
that held my youth
a clink in the glasses
a melded brew

on the brink of disaster
a welded chain hereafter
the staining ink and plaster
then held me like a master

all the cling and clatter
a belt that chokes no matter
what i bring as batter
a fling that just gets fatter

to me its all i see
and i feel bad to say
heaven i am sorry
but i lied.

i do not love you

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  1. Date: 1/8/2013 2:10:00 PM
    A good title for this would be "I Do Not Love You" You have a unique style all of your own but I do enjoy your verses, stay cool and be nobody's fool, xxx

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    Date: 1/9/2013 2:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you for the idea of the title. the main reason the title was what it was was because i could not think of one. thank you again, -izzy