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I Don'T Love You

When I saw you yesterday You lied a liittle more. And now lookin' at you I'm showing you the door. You told me you loved me You said you'd be there. Now go and let me be 'Cause what I need is rare. Why are you still here? I told you we were through. You need to get your things 'Cause I don't love you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/23/2008 6:32:00 PM
Elizabeth, Welcome to the SOUP Very clever is this the second half of YOUR Qutrain "I Want You to Know" one thought 2 POEMS Ingenious I have read YOUR Haikus "fall" and "Summer" and YOUR Senryu "Ashley" Very similar to another POET on this site wiyh the same Surname Again Welcome Merry Christmas and may the New Year bring YOU and YOURS Health and Prosperity...HG
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Date: 12/17/2008 6:28:00 AM
A poem that reflects much inner strength. Great heartfelt write. Happy Holidays. Love Robin
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Date: 11/15/2008 9:49:00 AM
Welcome to poetry soup where you are amongst good company. Nice touching poem...Raul
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