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I Don'T Like

I don’t like this. I don’t deserve it either. Everyone else has someone good. I have a disease from the hood. I don’t want it anymore. I hate to see it walking through my door, Pain, strife, not treating me right. Wanting badly to be someone’s wife. It seems that I hate being me, Because I always get mistreated. I don’t like this, But I won’t declare to be defeated. wrote 9-13-09

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Joanna Smith

Date: 1/18/2010 2:36:00 PM

now this is very good and i really got into it! i hope it's not true tho no one should be mistreated! have you read violence? you could if you wanted to see my point of view on the whole mistreated wife thing. but really great poem you have here!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/15/2010 2:20:00 PM

I like this.Good one, Nicole!

Jared Pickett

Date: 1/15/2010 10:34:00 AM

"Disease from the hood" I like that line...:].... I know it can be hard to break away from a bad situation. Keep your head up and someone will seek you out and sweep you off your feet..... Never except defeat......:}....:JP]