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I Don'T Know

Emerald eyes with flecks of gold look at me and I wonder, What do you see? if you’ve ever been called a delight? Chestnut hair, flaming ‘gainst the setting sun, oh, how it would billow. I wonder, Would you lay for me? if you’ve ever been caressed by moonlight? Skin so smooth with no blemish in view, with rich, red lips, and I wonder, Passion, fire, destiny? if my dreams will come true on this night.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/27/2010 11:18:00 AM
I'm sure she's somewhere you described her so well..Lovely...Allie
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Date: 4/21/2010 7:04:00 PM
This is great. I love your style its very enticing. Keep it up! Another lovely poem.
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Date: 4/21/2010 4:41:00 AM
Thanks folks. I was actually just suffering from insomnia last night so started a rambling write. This came out. Don't I wish she was real!
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Date: 4/21/2010 4:37:00 AM
I enjoyed the poem. nice write
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Date: 4/20/2010 9:37:00 PM
nice one
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