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I Did It My Way

Only a few moments of a peek into your beauty, Both my heart and head plunged for the bootie. Emotions, of my heart, I could still keep inside, But my heart beating for you, how could I hide? Life with you, each moment, I felt complete, Sure I did not waste my precious life to deplete. ‘I am breaking up with you’, you said repeatedly to me, You searched your freedom; I lived by your essence in me. I was not, you know, the one to bicker and fight, Clear was my conscious and wished your future bright. I myself broke my heart into pieces infinite, therefore, Left me no cause to plead, before you, anymore. This was my way of doing and taking it upon myself, Your happiness was dearer even if my heart became a delf. Sonnet: 14 lines Contest: I did it my way Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton Date: 13.06.2014

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/23/2014 4:27:00 PM

Way to go with this great winning entry..Congrats ..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/22/2014 1:10:00 PM

you are welcome..PD

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/22/2014 12:36:00 PM

Congrats on a fine win!!!!

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/22/2014 11:51:00 PM

Thanx, Robert.

Len Gasun

Date: 6/22/2014 11:13:00 AM

This is a great write my dear friend Mohan. So glad to read it tonight. My hearty congratulations on your great win. Hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/22/2014 11:18:00 AM

Thankyou Leonora for your visit and encouraging comments. Mohan

Skat A

Date: 6/21/2014 10:49:00 PM

Hi Mohan, Congratulations, on your win..... Love SKAT

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/22/2014 7:44:00 AM

Thanks SKAT. Mohan

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/21/2014 10:10:00 PM

Wonderful win...PD

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/22/2014 7:45:00 AM

Thanx PD.

Paul Callus

Date: 6/21/2014 5:43:00 PM

This is a gentlemanly attitude, Mohan! Well done! Congrats on a deserved win. // paul

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/21/2014 7:18:00 PM

Paul, thanks for your valuable support. Mohan

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/21/2014 4:32:00 PM

i was touched by your selfless kind of love, mohani.. kudos to you for a shining win!.. huggs

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/21/2014 7:22:00 PM

Thanx Nette. So many incidents in life have made one learn that one is happy in generosity than in cribbing and spoiling one's own equanimity. Love to have your continuous support. Mohan

Jan Allison

Date: 6/21/2014 3:54:00 PM

Very moving write. a well deserved win. Hugs jan xxxx

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/21/2014 7:24:00 PM

Thanx Jan. Love to hear from you always. Mohan

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 6/21/2014 2:31:00 PM

Sweet heart gives an awesome write Mohan ! Loved the style u did ur way ,, congrats on huge win !

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/21/2014 7:33:00 PM

Thanx Upma. There are still many people who feel that one has to fight till the end, whatever be the relationship. I think our upbringing in India makes us learn to let go also, in many matters. Mohan

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/21/2014 2:10:00 PM

Mohan, my friend, once again you did it your way, and it paid off big time - congratulations on a big win!

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/21/2014 7:34:00 PM

My friend Pandita, great to have your wishes as ever. Mohan

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/21/2014 1:44:00 PM

Mohan, When you do all you can to make a relationship work, you can move forward afterward with a "clear" conscience. And you showed maturity by wishing her well in spite of all she'd done. Your poem reveals your tender nature and I hope you have found someone more worthy of you. Congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/21/2014 7:40:00 PM

Thanx Carolyn for your concern. This is an imagery that I used from so many other real experiences. However, I am personally fortunately still with my life partner and doing well and we shall celeberate our silver jubilee of togetherness next year. Love, Mohan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/21/2014 1:08:00 PM

Congratulations, Mohan. Something I can see was from your heart.

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/21/2014 7:28:00 PM

Andrea, I try to listen to the voice of my heart and it gives peace even if there is a worldly loss. Mohan

Tim Smith

Date: 6/21/2014 12:14:00 PM

How moving.. Congrats on the win

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/21/2014 7:25:00 PM

Thanx Tim for your best wishes.Mohan

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/21/2014 8:26:00 AM

good sonnet Mohan congrats on 2nd place ty for entering hugs

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/21/2014 10:20:00 AM

Thank you Shadow, for the honor that you have bestowed on my write. It was indeed a pleasure to enter your contest. Look forward to more. Mohan

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/21/2014 7:16:00 AM

Well done! a moving piece you have penned and have received second place for, very awesome :) good job ;)

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/21/2014 10:22:00 AM

Thank you Casarah for your sweet wishes. Mohan

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 6/21/2014 7:12:00 AM

dropping by to rain you a greeting of COngratulations frien Mohan.. :D!!!!!

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/21/2014 10:23:00 AM

Olive, thanks once again for your sweet wishes. Mohan

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/16/2014 7:23:00 AM

Me again, I got so caught up with the sentiments of what you wrote that I forgot to comment - well done, my friend!

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/16/2014 8:03:00 AM

Thanx again. It is always pleasure to receive your visits, my dear friend. Mohan

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/16/2014 7:18:00 AM

Hi Mohan, breaking up is usually very hard to do but we have to be strong and let people go whether they are lovers, friends, or family - often it is better to just get the strength and move on, my friend. Warmest wishes.

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/16/2014 8:02:00 AM

Pandita, you got the message spot on. Love is more about giving than taking, I preseume. Mohan

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 6/14/2014 3:41:00 AM

Sad sweet write bout selfless love.. :)

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/14/2014 5:26:00 AM

yes Olive, my friend, Mohan

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/13/2014 9:50:00 AM

Quite romantic write, Mohan

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/13/2014 9:58:00 AM

Thank you Dr. Ram. What a coincident. I was just reading your wall and biography page. Would like to connect if you are in India. Best Regards, Mohan