I Crave

I crave for thee oh heights Fathomless heights, Hiding beyond the skies Where wisdom and wealth lies I crave for thy zenith oh heights, Fathomless heights; Not for the audacity of euphoria Nor for the aroma of nostalgia. I crave for thy topnotch oh heights Fathomless heights; To become the epitome of an epicure And my brains and brawns to insure I crave for thee oh heights Fathomless heights: The abode of the twinkling stars, The home that can’t behold scary scars.

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James Fraser

Date: 5/31/2009 12:33:00 PM

Cleverly written poem Adeleke, i like - James

Jay Loveless

Date: 5/21/2009 7:24:00 AM

This is really pretty i think. Nice job.

Farah Chamma

Date: 5/20/2009 8:44:00 AM

That's a great emotional write...As usual ...Thank you for sharing your poetry Always, Farah

Brian Anderson

Date: 4/18/2009 5:17:00 AM

this poems flows like warm molasses. thrilling

Jane Bowen

Date: 4/7/2009 1:13:00 PM

Brilliantly executed and well thought out my wonderful poet friend!~ BRAVO to you and your wisdom of truth...you are the poet~ I loved the epitome of an epicure my brains and brawns to insure...what a thought! and the audacity of euphoria ...the aroma of nostalgia! Just sharp witted splendid poetry Mr. Sir!!! Thanks for commenting on my poem that just barely survived the 1st round ....Yeay!...:0 Have a great week, and I shall do the same. This is going into my faviorites. Always a friend! jane

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 4/6/2009 3:08:00 AM

An unusual way of carrying rhme through both from stanza to stanza, - by way of first two lines in each, therefore linking. But then to rhyme separately last two lines of each stanza separately makes this rather clever aswell as being cleverly descriptive of the infinity of our skies and beyond...Well done and thanks for commenting my writes! Anna-Marie.