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I Could Run

I could run 1700 miles With just one breath One intent I could fly across the states With my arms spread wide Flying high I could make it there In just one hour Or less Fall into your arms Smile in your kiss Bask in your warmth Your eyes light up We could dance beneath Louisiana trees As The stars burn like tea candles I could run 1700 miles Fly all the way to your heart In my dreams

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/20/2013 1:55:00 PM
this is wonderful and visualy stunning. You have painted the picture with your lovely words.
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Date: 2/19/2013 5:21:00 PM
the best kind of love... great write :)
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Date: 2/19/2013 3:25:00 PM
Sometimes knowing what we're willing to do is proof enough of our devtions - its beautiful when devotion eliminates the dread of doubt - its fun to play in dreams - be careful with the landing though :b - 'Smile in your kiss...' is real sweet - J.A.B. %
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Date: 2/19/2013 3:24:00 AM
How absolutely fantastic! Loved this write! He better be deserving of you! :)
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