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I Celebrate You

I celebrate love In you I celebrate life With you I celebrate times gone And Days Who will come for you As in meant of calendar Is you I celebrate you

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Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 1/15/2014 12:48:00 AM

Very good Sallam. A most enjoyable piece here bro.

Sallam Yassin
Date: 1/15/2014 1:03:00 AM

Thanks brother and stay blessed with joy

Christine Phillips

Date: 1/15/2014 12:01:00 AM

I like the use of the second person "You" in this poem. It could be interpreted as a person as well as a season. The word calendar is very strong as it could also be a birthday, event anniversary or something special. I like this poem. A very good attempt.

Sallam Yassin
Date: 1/15/2014 12:30:00 AM

Thanks Christine and celebrate always your season of love in heart stay happy ;)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/14/2014 11:01:00 AM

- A beautiful love poem, Sallam. - // Anne-Lise :)

Sallam Yassin
Date: 1/14/2014 12:16:00 PM

thanks Anne-Lise from heart and may you be blessed always with love ; )