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I Caught a Falling Star

I caught a falling star, oh yes, I swear I did I put it in a jar and fastened tight the lid So when it’s late at night or days are kind of gray Then I can use it’s light to help me find my way

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Date: 10/7/2021 6:57:00 AM
Ahh!! I really like this one. I feel the emotion in the work. Your visit was uplifting. Sara
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Chris Green
Date: 10/7/2021 2:34:00 PM
Thank you so very much Sara
Date: 10/6/2021 11:26:00 PM
Fun and sweet.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/7/2021 2:34:00 PM
Thank you Karen.
Date: 10/6/2021 7:50:00 PM
A sweet little nursery rhyme!
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Chris Green
Date: 10/7/2021 2:34:00 PM
Thanks so much Kim
Date: 10/6/2021 5:47:00 PM
So sweet Chris. I am going to think of this on dim days ! :)
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Chris Green
Date: 10/7/2021 2:34:00 PM
Thank you Heidi.
Date: 10/6/2021 5:42:00 PM
I remember when Perry Como put that falling star in his pocket. You 'jarred' my memory, Chris. (Groan/Ugh). A little humor there -- very little. Smiles, Gershon
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Chris Green
Date: 10/7/2021 2:34:00 PM
Hey, I remember that too. : ) Thanks my friend.
Date: 10/6/2021 4:15:00 PM
aww so sweet Chris:-) reminds me of catch a falling star and put it in my pocket save it for a rainy day:-) hugs Jan xx
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Chris Green
Date: 10/7/2021 2:33:00 PM
Thank you so very much Jan
Date: 10/6/2021 3:19:00 PM
Hi Chris, I really enjoyed this well written poem. Good content and imagery. I could just picture the whole scene. Well done:-) Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 10/7/2021 2:33:00 PM
Thank you Alexis.
Date: 10/6/2021 2:53:00 PM
Lighthearted and fun.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/7/2021 2:33:00 PM
Thanks Karen.
Date: 10/6/2021 2:38:00 PM
Enchanting Chris. A wonderful thought!
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Chris Green
Date: 10/6/2021 2:47:00 PM
Hey there my friend from over the pond. Thanks so much for stopping by
Date: 10/6/2021 1:55:00 PM
I've heard falling stars can lead you home, this is lovely~
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Chris Green
Date: 10/6/2021 2:06:00 PM
Thanks so much Michelle.

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