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I Can'T Wait

I love the way it spins around, Milkshake mixer's whirring sound, Lots of milk, chocolate flavour, What a drink it is to savour, Better still as it goes down.

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Kp Nunez

Date: 4/19/2015 8:13:00 PM

I like! One order please! Yum of a lim! How much? Here's $7, keep the change! :) Uh, I wasn't done with the comment and it got sent...kidding aside, good morning John! Glad to read your new post...:)

John Williams
Date: 4/19/2015 8:55:00 PM

So nice to hear from you Kim. I think it's good evening where you are, morning here. I will send you one through the post{ but it might leak }. What flavour would you like? Thanks Kim for having a read,.....Your a gracious lady I do concede.......Hugs from John

Tim Smith

Date: 4/19/2015 2:05:00 PM

I love me some milkshakes... I hand make them for my kiddies all the time

John Williams
Date: 4/19/2015 11:16:00 PM

Hello Tim, What a good dad you are making those lovely milkshakes for your children. I am a milk shake lover too . Thanks for having a read Tim. kind regards----John......PS: i hope you put in a dob of ice-cream on special occasions

Jack Ellison

Date: 4/19/2015 7:44:00 AM

Okay! You have excited my taste buds! It's early morning here... is it too early for chocolate milkshake? NAW!

John Williams
Date: 4/19/2015 8:32:00 AM

It's close to midnight in Australia Jack, but i'm going to join you. I can hear the whirring now. Bottoms up { to coin a phrase } , here's to you. Cheers-----John