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He was lying there naked Tempting me – I wanted him oh so much Finally I could take no more I grabbed him mercilessly Popped him in my mouth I’ve never been able to resist eating Jelly Babies! 16th March 2015

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Date: 3/26/2015 11:36:00 AM
Great write and an excellent share!!
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Date: 3/26/2015 12:00:00 PM
Thanks Funom:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/21/2015 9:48:00 PM
I would rather have the hunk than the jelly babies.!!!! Richard by the way is not yet really going grey just fading a bit LOL Much love to you Edith
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Date: 3/23/2015 12:42:00 PM
Aww Mama Bear don't spoil my illusion lol:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 3/19/2015 10:09:00 AM
Wow I just read Richards comment, I didn't realize he was sending you pictures too!
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Date: 3/23/2015 12:42:00 PM
Shhh Armand don't tell everyone my secret:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/19/2015 10:08:00 AM
Great job on photoshop. You did a perfect job of putting a young face on a picture of my bawdy (Misspelling intended). When you say Jelly Babies are we back to discussing brewers droop again?
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Date: 3/23/2015 12:41:00 PM
lol:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/18/2015 10:31:00 AM
At first I thought, where did you get the photo of me? On second glance I realized his hair was darker than mine*lol*!
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Date: 3/18/2015 10:35:00 AM
lol Richard ... but you do know I have a thing for men with greying hair lol:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/18/2015 12:47:00 AM
I just read "I Can't Resist You" and stopped at the picture, thennnnnnnnnn slowly scrolled down. How fun, and how lewd. Truly enjoyable. Trouble is, that pic was me thirty years ago and no one ever writes a poem and posts a sexy Jessica Biel photo. Thanks for the contribution and keep writing, I love it.
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Date: 3/18/2015 4:27:00 AM
Thanks Brian I do try and write with a twist at the end of the poem if I can:-) I especially love to try and write with humour:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 3/17/2015 1:16:00 PM
Jelly Babies! They bring both sweet thoughts and a chuckle...what's not to love. Emile. #7
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Date: 3/17/2015 2:32:00 PM
Thanks Emile:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 3/17/2015 4:50:00 AM
Good job you never used my photo- people would have got the jelly baby bit straight away! Fun verse, Jan. Viv x
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Date: 3/17/2015 8:20:00 AM
Thanks for the humourous comment Mr Viv:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/17/2015 4:02:00 AM
LOL...Jan, I'll have what you're having!
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Date: 3/17/2015 8:19:00 AM
LOL Thanks Rhonda:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 3/17/2015 3:46:00 AM
Jelly babies always tempting. Naughty but love it. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 3/17/2015 8:19:00 AM
Thanks Ravi:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/16/2015 8:46:00 PM
ha! very funny and i agree with andrea, too!
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Date: 3/17/2015 2:13:00 AM
you guys have me so wrong I am not naughty! Hugs jan xx
Date: 3/16/2015 8:29:00 PM
LOL, very funny, glad you liked my photo by the way!
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Date: 3/17/2015 2:13:00 AM
Its the only one I have of you my friend - and the memories lol:-( Hugs jan xx
Date: 3/16/2015 7:41:00 PM
so naughty naughty!! Talk about a six pack!!!
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Date: 3/17/2015 2:12:00 AM
LOl Hugs Jan - me naughty no way! hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/16/2015 6:32:00 PM
Hmmmm candy, pleasure, love...yes, I see the correlation Jan. Lol! Mmmmm!
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Date: 3/16/2015 6:34:00 PM
LOl who can resist a bit of eye candy lol:-) Hugs jan xxx
Date: 3/16/2015 6:28:00 PM
LOL! Had to check for today's M.O.M. serving Jan. You never fail to amaze me, girl! Always a 7!
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Date: 3/16/2015 6:31:00 PM
lol Kim I do try to write with humour if I can:-) glad you enjoy it when I have an attack of the sillies which seems to be most days despite everything that is happening in my life at the moment. I am still waiting for the tears - it will be like Noah's ark when they eventually do happen lol:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 3/16/2015 5:21:00 PM
Wow! Jan looks beautiful when she blushes:) Sorry...couldn't resist that; those jelly babies sure are tempting. Hugs // paul
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Date: 3/16/2015 6:16:00 PM
Ha ha Ha I will have to bring a box over when we visit lol:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 3/16/2015 5:17:00 PM
Phew Jan! There is a happy ending. You never cease to have me guessing - Lindsay
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Date: 3/16/2015 6:15:00 PM
LOL Lindsay I do like to have a twist at the end if I can - the picture was deceptive lol:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/16/2015 3:33:00 PM
What are we going to do with you?...lol...hugs Tim
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Date: 3/16/2015 4:00:00 PM
***blushes*** I cannot give an answer to that Tim! Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/16/2015 3:22:00 PM
Jan, great pic!!!! and well done poem, naughty girl, I mean about the jelly babies !!! and thanks for your thoughtful comment on my poem, I write poems . . .
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Date: 3/16/2015 3:26:00 PM
Loved Jelly Babies ever since I was a kid - so does my hubby lol:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/16/2015 1:40:00 PM
Jan, Enjoyed this piece, go ahead enjoy yourself. Bess Wishes Kevin
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/16/2015 3:24:00 PM
Lovely to see you back Kevin:-) thanks for dropping by with your comment:-) Hugs jan xx

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