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I Cant Help Her

Sunday softly sweetly swinging, Freely flying forward, fabulous fun, She’s Smiling Seeing sunshine, Happily helping her healthy heart, Wife weeping woefully, Cannot control constant crying, Hideously hiding her hurt, Sponsor Joseph May Contest Name Alliterisen 9th May 2023

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Date: 6/13/2023 5:50:00 AM
Nice alliteration in this poem, and heartfelt.
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Merv Hold
Date: 6/13/2023 7:07:00 PM
Thank you Linda. Ahh heck this type of poem is easy, you only have a few words to choose from to make it rhyme so you dont have to think very hard.
Date: 6/2/2023 12:29:00 AM
This is a sad song, well written.
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Merv Hold
Date: 6/5/2023 6:50:00 PM
I am glad you liked it. Thanks for the comment

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