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I Can'T Find My Way To Heaven

I can't find my way to heaven From this hell in which I live. 'Cause I'm always taking, taking With nothing ever left to give. The way to heaven I have lost Since this hell I've called my home There's no room left for righteous In all the evil that I've done. I won't find a way to heaven From the hell that's all around When I search the path eludes me-- Here's the simple truth I've found; The way to heaven isn't solid And the hell in which I live Is a hell of my own making Leaving me with naught to give. So I'm building my way to heaven From this hell that is within And the pathway's so much stronger Built upon forgiven sin. D. H. Loewen Oct 10/18 All rights reserve's

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Date: 5/16/2024 2:03:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 10/28/2018 10:55:00 AM
A solid stairway to heaven in the making...even for others to follow...A poem many people experience...All the best David...
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