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I Can'T

I can’t get the rhythm Can’t get this rhyme I can’t get this song moving in time The whole of this lyric just feels so wrong Can’t get the beat bobbing along I can’t place the words Can’t hear the sounds I can’t stop this melody From playing around It’s just like one of those writing fights It must be one of those damn rotten nights I can’t write this tune and get it to rock I must be in a state of shock It just doesn't want to tick or tock I Just can’t believe I've got writers block No I can’t write this song Because it just don’t belong I think I should quit just heard a ding dong Must be someone pushing my bell Come back tomorrow I’m under some spell Copyright © 11th March 2014 K.C.Leake All Rights Reserved

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Date: 3/21/2014 6:51:00 AM
I CAN"T stop reading your work----Ha Well done!
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Kevin Leake
Date: 3/22/2014 3:46:00 PM
Hey Jerry, Thanks for the uplifting comment. Kevin
Date: 3/12/2014 11:24:00 AM
YOU SAY CAN'T.....BUT A BIG CAN
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Kevin Leake
Date: 3/12/2014 12:19:00 PM
Hey Syam, Appreciate your comment. thanks Kevin

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