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I Can Smell the Snow

As I look up into the heavy laden, pink night sky I can almost smell snow, as my Nan would say in years gone by. The sky is heavy I am sure it will give its all I look up, ‘Hey Nan, can you see me?’ I cautiously call.’ I can feel her around me her warm breath on my cheek It warms me to the heart as I eagerly seek. She was right! I did smell the first winter’s snowfall The flakes start to spiral down, majestically, covering all. They settle on my eyes my cheeks and my lips, Dancing and swirling - each as unique as our fingertips. They land so soft, no noise do they make silence is all around. I stand in wonder at the beauty, the flakes merge and cover the ground. A Winter Couplet First Snowfall.

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Date: 11/19/2012 12:50:00 PM
Dear Mandy, Check YOUR Soup Mail again ALWAYS and FOREVER YOURS... Harry Someone let me use their last ten minutes of Computer time.
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Date: 11/19/2012 12:08:00 PM
Dear Mandy, I have 2 minutes to write this but i'll be back in an Hour Soup Mail Reply LOVE YOU...Harry
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Date: 11/19/2012 11:52:00 AM
Dear Mandy, YOU always bring YOUR subject matter to Life I too could feel the unique snowflakes YOU really LOVE YOUR Nan, YOU speak of her often in YOUR Awesome Writes Superb Pen LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal (Young) Liege...Harry
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Date: 10/2/2012 7:13:00 AM
love the theme, excellent poem, see 'Nan" is there with you again... lovely
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Date: 11/18/2011 4:40:00 AM
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