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i can do nothing right

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i can do nothing right

sometimes with him
it seems like
i can do nothing right

no matter what i say
what i do 
nothing is ever right

people say drop him
people say deal...
what do i say?

i say hes my everything
i love him

they obiviously have no idea
what that word means
it means...what you make it

but i can do nothing right....
so what do i know?

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  1. Date: 11/26/2010 11:20:00 AM
    Liz, Love should never hurt, love should be 50/50... You never accept less then you deserve, and never, never change yourself for anyonebut your self... Trust me , I have been there done that till it formed who I am now.. and I am Happy... Best of luck my new Poet Michael

  1. Date: 11/25/2010 8:12:00 PM
    I AM SURE WE ALL FEEL LIKE THAT. I KNOW I SURE DO. LOVE THE TALENT HERE, hAVe A nIcE ONE Eliabeth, best holiday wishes*Luv~Skat