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I Can Can See For Miles

I hoped that bird could have stayed, It’s cloaked behind decisions I’ve made. A few feathers and sand, the price is paid, As they slip away the memory fades… One of the feathers I use to write. It grants me vision where there was no sight. A beacon to guide me out of the night, I shall squeeze by, though it’s rather tight… The words it reveals become part of me, These sunken eyes still can see. With a wing and a prayer I shall be, The words in turn shall set me free… One day I wish and hope to fly, Sometimes the moment just passes by. I know that I must, so I will try, This is when I soar through the sky… Meanwhile time passes through my fingers. Everything’s gone only a little taste lingers. Still with my friends I can’t help but smile. From way up here, I can see for miles…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/10/2011 11:37:00 AM
MARK, A VERY PLEASING THOUGHT AND WALK... ENJOYED,..P.D.
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Mark Russell
Date: 12/10/2011 12:24:00 PM
Thanks and nice hat that's the spirit I'm talking about. The smile is awesome too:) Open your heart and be a little more accepting and open your eyes and maybe see for the first time. But I don't need to tell you seems you are walking the walk:) In this magical season I can feel that peace is within our reach we just have to grab it:) Have a great day and Merry Christmas though it seems you are well on your way! Mark
Date: 12/9/2011 12:29:00 PM
Very good poem, it really caught me in the second par. and now im very glad i read it, anyways great job keep writing more!
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Date: 12/10/2011 12:38:00 PM
Thanks and today I truly can see for miles friends and fans have made it so. I am quite honored I just write what's in my heart:) Thanks for because of you I can see even further! Mark

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