I Can

LJH - 07/10/13 ‘I can’ Close your eyes, relax Set your mind on track Positive, the goal Enlighten your soul From darkness to light Say ‘I can’ not ‘might’ Determination Brings liberation Positive in mind Happiness you’ll find

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/20/2015 6:41:00 PM

that is the great power of positive thinking that you so aptly have described here, Laura. Nice seeing your poem today.

Laura Hay
Date: 6/21/2015 7:27:00 AM

Thank you very much Andrea! Warm regards, Laura

James Horn

Date: 6/5/2015 8:42:00 AM

Okay. So here is the one I think is the best one myself. No hugs or kisses or things like that though being I have been married for almost 50 years now. How did you find my Succession poem anyway? Jim Horn

Laura Hay
Date: 6/5/2015 8:57:00 AM

Thanks! I look at all the new poetry listed when I login and Read a selection. Kind rgds Laura

Kp Nunez

Date: 6/4/2015 7:15:00 PM

Very good perspective, Laura. Welcome to Poetry Soup! Keep writing, keep posting and keep visiting other pages to be encouraged and be an encourager too! Hugs! Kim :-)

Laura Hay
Date: 6/5/2015 1:21:00 AM

Thank you for your encouragement, much appreciated! I have been ready much before joining and learning a lot from what I read and by reading peoples comments too on their perspectives. I hope to learn and develop even more :-) Kind Rgds Laura

Paul Callus

Date: 6/4/2015 5:34:00 PM

Hi Laura! I love the positive attitude which you show in these lines. Wise advice! You can change the form into 'rhyme' or 'verse'. // paul

Laura Hay
Date: 6/5/2015 1:23:00 AM

Thank you Paul. And thank you for advising which form this is - I guess I should have realised 'rhyme' would fit, but i'm still learning - so this kind of feedback is most useful. Much appreciated, Kind Rgds, Laura

Charles Gragg

Date: 6/4/2015 8:53:00 AM

Well written.

Laura Hay
Date: 6/5/2015 1:23:00 AM

Thank you Charles! Kind Rgds, Laura