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I Breath Harder

. She steps and i breath She lets her hair down and i breath harder She has desperately Caught my attention i follow her i breath harder and harder

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/18/2010 11:59:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 5/17/2010 3:30:00 PM
Oh, you are such a trickster! I nearly had a heart attack. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
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Date: 5/17/2010 5:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week James. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/16/2010 9:42:00 PM
Congrats James on your featured poem this week on the Soup... great choice.. enjoyed.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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