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I Blend a Tale From Hues

I BLEND A TALE FROM HUES Hue of cobalt blue reigns quiet the sky, The shining light from the sun witnesses blend of stories, sloped half in the solid ground is a home-- once a chandelier of love shown out bright from jumping hues painted forepart on the wall of the house. Some trees lush with green leaves peeps to this gray man bowing low. They tell black and white tales that was once here. Unto the ground are dusts, stones gathered slow by blowing winds, They bury somehow some sad memories this land suffered long ago. When will all beam a toned thought? _______________________ Picture #2 ©O.E. Guillermo Contest: East Jesus Sponsor: Roy Jerden Placed: 5th 01:12 am, December 30, 2014

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 1/3/2015 8:56:00 PM

Lovely kimo Olive! Congrats on ur big win!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/4/2015 7:58:00 AM

congrats too Dr. Upma I read your entry.. :)!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/3/2015 6:00:00 AM

Congrats on the the win with this fine take on the theme, Olive

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/4/2015 7:57:00 AM

thanks much Dr. Ram.. :)!

Earl Schumacker

Date: 1/3/2015 5:31:00 AM

Hi Olive, You have great language skills and usage. This was very interesting to read. I enjoyed your creation immensely. Good for you. Keep up the good work. Happy New Year! Have a great week end. Take care. Earl

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/4/2015 7:56:00 AM

thanks much Earl, I learned a lot since I join here on soup.. :)! i love reading this helped me but in joining here helped me more.. :)!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/3/2015 12:09:00 AM

I really like your poem, Olive. How are you? HOpe you are enjoying the new year. Congrats here for your win.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/4/2015 7:55:00 AM

thanks Andrea for liking my poem.. :) this only some figments of my imagination.. :)@

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/2/2015 11:52:00 PM

Olive, Interesting topic, poem and win. CONGRATULATIONS!!! Goodnight ~LINDA~

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/4/2015 7:49:00 AM

morning Lolly Linda. :) thanks much. :D!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 1/2/2015 12:15:00 PM

a commendable interpretation of Pic#2. Loved you won Olive. Hugs! >rajat

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/4/2015 7:53:00 AM

thanks much Rajat.. :)! GBU

Paul Callus

Date: 1/2/2015 11:14:00 AM

Congratulations Olive_eloi! I must have missed this lovely poem before, so good thing I found you on the winners' list! Like the imagery. hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/4/2015 7:43:00 AM

thanks much PAul! Appreciate it!

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 1/2/2015 11:04:00 AM

Congrats on the win Olive,this is simply fantastic...huggs

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/4/2015 1:26:00 AM

thanks much Sir.. :)! appreciate it lots!

Jan Allison

Date: 1/2/2015 10:28:00 AM

such a colourful write - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/4/2015 1:25:00 AM

Thanks you so much fro the ocmment JAn.. :)!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 12/31/2014 9:34:00 AM

toned thought--great Olive.God bless. Wish you and your family happy New Year 2015. See you NY.Love--rajat

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/1/2015 4:26:00 AM

thank you so much Rajat.. :)! I really appreciate your comments.. :)! you all do pull my muse to write more and more.. :)!

Leon Enriquez

Date: 12/31/2014 7:43:00 AM

Dear Olive: Thank you for the support my friend. Here's wishing you and your loved ones A Happy New Year filled with peace, joy and love. All my best wishes on the last day of 2014, Leon.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/31/2014 6:13:00 PM

Dear Leon thanks much for dtoppinh by.. God bless you and Happy New Year. :)!

Tim Smith

Date: 12/31/2014 6:16:00 AM

Full of colorful imagery Olive...wonderful... Happy New Year.... Hugs Tim

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/31/2014 6:11:00 PM

thanj you so much Tim.. :) God bless.. :)