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I Bled Too

its like you said. none of it was real, nor will it ever be. your love wasnt real your touch wasnt real her pain wasnt isnt just wasnt real nonexistent false a lie the whole time the blood still stains trust me i was there you lied not false because even a lie exists somewhere she said she would she did it really did it no... you did it, and now you can live the rest of your life knowing living feeling it was your fault.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/18/2015 3:00:00 AM
heyy izzy!! i loved this one. i can relate to it so well.. heartbreaks are tough. i can imagine everything you've been through in this poem. so strong, so powerful... well done! (keep in touch!)
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Date: 11/22/2013 5:18:00 PM
I think you must have actually bled on the page. Well captured emotions.
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Date: 11/22/2013 12:22:00 PM
very deep Izzy ~:) Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 11/22/2013 11:40:00 AM
the wailing of a soul that needs some answers... wonderfuly scribed dipped in wretched emotions.. i like the poetic mood of this, izzy... nice to have read you today!..:) huggs
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Date: 11/22/2013 10:34:00 AM
Wow..This poem is filled with tons of emotion Izzy! I hope the pain is more on paper or imaginary than it is "real" that is, out of your own real world hurt and pain. Either way...Great writing///keep it up sweety...Cheers, Terry
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Date: 11/22/2013 9:18:00 AM
Great work ! The old demon, retrospect is a frequent visitor! You said it so well!!
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