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I Beg of You Please

Will you be my love, I beg of you please I'm here before you, down on my knees Shouldn't have knelt Getting up, sure need help Love ya a bunch but my giddy-up has fleed

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Michael Tor

Date: 10/11/2015 1:04:00 AM

Jack its ok to take it easy. Let her get on her knees she can do it just as well as you.

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/11/2015 6:49:00 AM

But that's just not right! Great idea though! LOL

Carol Eastman

Date: 10/10/2015 12:46:00 PM

Been a weird few weeks at our home. New pacemaker. puppie put to sleep. Locked out of the house and used a tall garbage can to crawl back in the kitchen sink window. Found wasps inside (the outside lid) of my sons car's gas cap. Did a lively dance before filling the tank. Found more wasps in his car trunk(lively dance again). And worst of all- Jack got sick! Glad your back! Need some new excitement... Things were getting dull... LOL... REALLY! Where is a good Dragon or Troll when you need one!

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/11/2015 6:48:00 AM

Locked out???? Been there, done that! Did the same thing... crawl through an unlocked window! Hmmm some clever bad guy could do the same thing!!! :( xoxox

Tim Smith

Date: 10/10/2015 11:09:00 AM

When your giddyup is lacking....and instead of forward your backing....tickle the fancy....of the neighbor girl Nancy....and soon those jokes you'll be a cracking.

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/11/2015 6:45:00 AM

OOOOUUUU! The neighbour's young daughter is a hottie! Did ya hear the one about......

Jan Allison

Date: 10/10/2015 7:51:00 AM

I know the feeling been struggling with sciatica since 21st sept ... but am finally on the mend:-) hugs Jan xx

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/10/2015 9:17:00 AM

So sorry to hear that dear sis! Happy to hear you're on the mend though!!! Love, Jack xxx