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As I drag this rough frame, this ageing shell, that's carried me across a lifetime to this place at your feet, I look into your eyes and I ask you Imagine a proud, wavy crown of auburn hair, thick and strong, a crown you could run your fingers through and twirl it, to and fro Imagine these blue eyes that my father gave me, still the deepest hue, but sparkling then with no glint of the sadness that they have come to show Imagine a face, smooth and fair, no beard of white, no furrowed brow, with a smile that would melt your heart Imagine a laugh with no halt or apology, in that happy way of youth, a laugh that called out others to come play Imagine these arms, then like hawser ropes, sinews at the ready to hold you tight, to carry you clear across the world Imagine this body, like a carving in those days past, lean and muscled, wanting for your hands to find their purchase Imagine now this man, still gentle and kind but with that blinding glow of youth, waiting, proudly at your feet to do your bidding I ask you then, imagine when you look on this ageing shell, this mortal husk; that glow still waits inside for you

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Date: 7/9/2014 4:53:00 PM
That glow will never fade in a person whose young at heart-A beautiful romantic poem.
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David Brown
Date: 7/9/2014 5:24:00 PM
Thank you Charmaine. For some reason (maybe my age) this one is special to me

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