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I Am Sorry

I am sorry, I broke my promise A heavy voice spoke, wracked in guilt with a dagger in my heart, I wept all alone as the world moved on to a new day. little snippets raced, still within your gravity. and I stayed in your arms, with no words to say. Cacophonic thunders and lightning fears enveloped me in darkness of helpless tears. Drenched in rain I slowly turn to sunshine, Oh! your lies were so beautiful... Stars glittered in everlasting nights my moonlit sky turned calm and cool. Dreamy clouds and foamy fountains in pristine passion, mingle into a river. I forgive and set free, two prisoners of love only fractals of moments I keep forever. You were sorry that you broke your promise I am sorry, I couldn't break mine. Dated 27th May 2021 Sponsor Unseeking Seeker Contest Name FORGIVENESS

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Date: 6/10/2021 8:58:00 AM
This is so beautifully written from both sides of the story, :)
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Date: 6/4/2021 2:04:00 PM
This is a great poem, Debjani. The theme "Forgiveness" is so beautifully expressed - Love the last two lines "You were sorry that you broke your promise I am sorry, I couldn't break mine. " WOW! So profound! Love and best wishes ~ Mala
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Date: 6/1/2021 6:01:00 AM
Since moments are fractal it's not easy to break promises made on time. Very nice composition. Congratulations.
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