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I Am So About This

Standing next to a fire hydrant Alone Sitting on a park bench Bothered by you rather I be alone Looking into a broken mirror Cliche' People bore me. That they do. I'm a person so I am also quite the Drag Silly vagrants honking horns, fancying party favors Yuck Find me eyed on my lap, Glued to boring my old shelf back Together All are you completely wrong about us I am so about this. Watching look that faces have right now. Right now is when? Tomorrow is yesterday while present in today. Tomorrow And Yesterday Definitely Today So, so lame as you mock me my case I rest. but I have too much to declare. June 8, 2017 Contest: The Bleaker the Better Sponsor: Julia Ward

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Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 7/1/2017 9:44:00 PM

Congrats on the 1st place. Yhis is too good! :)

Ironic Zink
Date: 8/29/2017 1:23:00 AM

Thank You. Much appreciated!!

Jeremy Smith

Date: 6/26/2017 2:32:00 PM

Congrats on your first trophy and putting this fine piece on the BEST NEW!!!

Ironic Zink
Date: 6/26/2017 3:38:00 PM

Awesome! A trophy and a Best New feature! This is like a double whammy. I love Julia Ward for her contest inspiration and of course, hooking me up with my first trophy! It's like a weight has been lifted off of my mind. It took me 1.5years to get a trophy. I kept at it. Never give up on poetry and poetry will not ever give up on you.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 6/25/2017 9:30:00 AM

Real cool, anti-grav groove poem, Ir0nic. You repel your disgust at us so well. Kudos on the win. Magnificent poem, which free thinkers like me loves to read. You are on my radar now, friend. May love light your path always. Romantic Warrior

Ironic Zink
Date: 6/25/2017 3:32:00 PM

Thank you Freddie. I must warn you about my radar. It is and it isn't. I wouldn't say hit or miss but surely a little off. But every now and then I am on. Peace in my friend.

Julia Ward

Date: 6/25/2017 9:05:00 AM

A wonderfully perceptive and unique poem! Thank you so much, Ir0nic, and congratulations for winning the trophy in my contest. All the best, Julia

Julia Ward
Date: 6/27/2017 9:02:00 AM

I'm so pleased...

Ironic Zink
Date: 6/25/2017 3:41:00 PM

I've been trying for the past year and a half to win that trophy and thanks to you and your contest I can finally stop pining over that trophy! I'm happy!

Julia Ward
Date: 6/25/2017 3:08:00 PM

Your trophy will ensure lots of views. :)

Ironic Zink
Date: 6/25/2017 2:39:00 PM

Thank you so much! My first trophy! I'm honored and grateful.