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I Am Shootinq Star

fly dreams unreachable as far as an airplane's window could never see could never see me imagine gravity holdinq me back once more setting fire the door once more oh that curiousity may let me sing please, fear, go away from my window so this air can caress another and bother me no more i am shootinq star.

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Date: 8/25/2010 3:51:00 PM
wonderful... friend! shooting stars are rare and real... please check the forms of poetry on Poetry Soup so as to avoid, "I Don't Know" I guess this is a free verse. would like to say welcome to the Soup, keep your poetry pen dancing to the drumbeat of your passion and pride... you will find a lot of encouragements here... keep up the great work. Love always, Adeleke
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Date: 8/25/2010 5:19:00 AM
I am happy your poetry was among the poetry I had a chance to read today Chante. Thank you for sharing your writing. Love, Carol
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