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I Am Scorpion

Simplistic in view Caring of heart Original in style Rehabilitated in life Poetic in love Insightful in thought Omni competent

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Lena Townsend

Date: 3/3/2009 10:32:00 PM

It is nice to meet you Scorpio, I see that you left out a few important qualitites, LOL, but you definately nailed the rest. Ithis is awesome. Smiles from Lolita

Catherine Reinke

Date: 2/25/2009 3:08:00 PM

very good, yet what I know of scorpio how could you resist sex references? and you do not seem simplistic. Thank you for your comment on my site... It was a hard time for me when my grandma died. Thank God I can purge my emtions with the pen

Belinda Parish

Date: 2/18/2009 3:35:00 PM

Now I know what kind of person you are...brilliant!!

Sue Mason

Date: 2/18/2009 11:41:00 AM

Not sure that I understand the last line here, Michael so I'll look up the word "omni" ... smile ... what is your day/month? I'll add you to my list so I can send you a Happy Birthday blog ... oh, and good luck in the contest!!

Giselle Sun

Date: 2/17/2009 8:37:00 PM

Well, I have always loved Scorpios. This is why.

Deborah Herber

Date: 2/16/2009 10:20:00 PM

Awesome as usual! You have the gift dear scorpion!

Mary Duhart

Date: 2/16/2009 3:29:00 PM

Well done scorpio and thanks for the reviews on my work also..

Abe Lopez

Date: 2/13/2009 9:29:00 PM

great job scorpio ...... a well thought out write

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/13/2009 4:30:00 PM

Thank you Michael for the claw-machine tips!! I will pass them on to Tim, (my son-in-law)...he's so funny to watch...he's really into those darn things with lots of detemination!! Sounds like you've had a few hours spent with them as well!! (We have a few stuffed animals around our place ....bet you do too!:)

Louise Nelson

Date: 2/13/2009 11:41:00 AM

Dear Michael, I'm not sure that omni compentent is a word or a phrase but I like the thought. Always a thrill to see your work and always a pleasure to receive your comments.Your Sister in Christ and in poetry.love, louise nelson ps: I finished "no more excuses" let me know what you think of the complete poem.

John Tanaskow

Date: 2/13/2009 4:36:00 AM

man i'm no critic but thanks. !..!,

Brian Strand

Date: 2/13/2009 12:11:00 AM

Thanks for your welcome comments on my postings Michael.Rgds Brian

Verlecia Fields

Date: 2/12/2009 4:13:00 PM

very Shakespearean and i like~ P.S. Thank you for the comment ~on "Mr.Valentines Day"09' your always very kind~

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/12/2009 3:53:00 PM

Wow, Michael! I think you captured the essence of what poetry can be: inspiring and concise. I fear I'm a bit wordy; I'll have to work on it. Best - Carolyn

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 2/12/2009 2:55:00 PM

Michael thank you for your comment. This poem is really nice. Good job...Love Elizabeth

Frank F. Atanacio

Date: 2/12/2009 10:24:00 AM

Nice write-- but when you Goggle this-- My face appears.. Only kidding very enjoyable read as always my friend :)

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/12/2009 9:15:00 AM

why always with the rehabilitated why not liberated sometime. john

John Rhinem

Date: 2/12/2009 7:13:00 AM

Smile~I can see that dear Brother!~"Hello Blessed Michael Jordan & All Your Loves!!!"~I sincerely hope that you are all doing very well!!? I loved your discriptive within this short but very lovely and gifted write! And I do believe, that it does, describe yourself to a 'T'~"God Has Given You A Beautiful Soul!!!" ~"My Love Always To You & Your Loves, Forever, John!":)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/12/2009 6:24:00 AM

That you seem to be! Light & Love and thanks for reading me! Debbie

Tyesha Ehigiator

Date: 2/11/2009 10:45:00 PM

Wow, you said it all and then some.LOL, Love the originality in this poem. It is one thing to have others see you in this beautiful light that shines so bright, but when you see yourself and acknowledge all the wonderful gifts that God gave you, all your wonderful qualities, it is truly amazing.Beautifully written Michael!! this one's definitely in the Tops!! Sorry I missed this earlier, haven't been on in a few days.Thank you for your kind words, and My brother is doing great.God Bless*Tyesha

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/11/2009 5:29:00 PM

You are all those things, and more. There is more depth to you, Michael, than most! Good luck in the contest...this poem is first class! ~ Love, Carrie

Daver Austin

Date: 2/11/2009 2:53:00 PM

OUCH, Mike, those thirteen holes in your nose. Your poem fits you perfectly considering what you've been through. Love, daver

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 2/11/2009 9:47:00 AM

Great poem in this form. I am Libra...Hmmm. Thanks for your comment Michael.

Date: 2/11/2009 9:35:00 AM

What a creative and well-written poem. Wow! I can attest to your caring heart. Good luck in the contest. This is a winner! Thank you for your ongoing encouragement. Blessings to you. Karen

Amy Swanson

Date: 2/11/2009 7:43:00 AM

This is wonderful! I love seeing the astrology acrostics that folks have come up with. Is this in the contest? If not it should be! :) My mom also was a scorpio. She revelled in it! haha She was very much a scorpio through and through, and she taught me how to march to the beat of my own drum. Excellent people, they are. You did a fantastic job with this. Thank you so much for the kind words you left on Mystic Walk, I deeply appreciate that. :) God bless & have a wonderful day! Love, Amy