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I Am Poetry: a Poet's Worth

Poetry: A strong pillar, the sun, the moon Stands on a point watching the Whole world,I expressed my feelings with Emotion,imagination. World of poetry, world of passion When day turns to dark, I bring it back to light, when world is in despair And fear,I give the courage. When world is breathless,I continue to Breathe, I am the true expression In the verse of words. When words is rock in the heart I bring it out Like piece of thread I am poetry, I am the world. 23/5/2015. Contest: A poet's worth. Sponsor: Fj Thomas.

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Date: 7/6/2015 1:30:00 PM
Afolabi, A great write here indeed!! I really like narrative and view here on "I Am Poetry!!" A "7" for sure. Cheers, Gary
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Date: 6/14/2015 12:36:00 AM
This has some gems ,when world is breathless' and 'when words is rock in the heart'...sparkling descriptions. Well done.
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Date: 6/7/2015 8:39:00 AM
This is an apt description, I think F.J. Will like it. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 6/4/2015 2:50:00 PM
You are truly a poet! Lovely poem
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Date: 6/3/2015 9:56:00 AM
beautifully done..!olive eloisa
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Date: 5/29/2015 5:50:00 PM
Good write, Afolabi, good luck in the contest a 7 from me. :~) hugs
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Date: 5/29/2015 1:22:00 PM
This is beautiful and so artistic, you have the poets passion a joy to read. very well done. a 7. best wishes. Pete.
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Date: 5/28/2015 8:13:00 AM
You definitely have a poet's soul! Beautiful expressions of what poetry means to the world. A 7!
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Date: 5/27/2015 11:12:00 AM
You surely know the real essence of poetry,afolabi... it is beyond words and the world!.. huggs
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Date: 5/27/2015 4:14:00 AM
This beautiful insightful poem is written from the tender heart of a poet, exquisitately! 7
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Date: 5/24/2015 10:43:00 PM
Your feelings are much appreciated. Thnx for stopping by. GL in the contest.
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Date: 5/24/2015 7:13:00 AM
Very well expressed...good luck in the contest....7
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Date: 5/23/2015 10:44:00 PM
I think you wrote a heartfelt piece of poetry about how YOU feel about poetry. I think the judge will like it!
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Date: 5/23/2015 3:26:00 PM
Seeing poetry through your verse is amazing. Nice job . I'm glad I stopped by.PS thanks for visiting me,its always a pleasure when you stop by Alexis:).
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Date: 5/23/2015 2:43:00 PM
Afolabi, your words are beautiful and poetic, a magical 7, and thanks for visiting my nature blitz poem, you can find the description of the form on the forms here on the soup, it is a bit complicated but very nice once you get the flow of it
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Date: 5/23/2015 2:38:00 PM
Your words took stage and treated the reader to a glimpse of your talent and imagination. Emile.
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