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I Am Nothing But the Color Red Premiere Contest Winner

My veins bleed of Crimson defeat- The way they flow with such ease and comfort brings me to my remorseful knees… I sleep with Ruby dreams and hope with Magenta skies and no matter the season or reason I am forever caught in Scarlet secrets. Tormented by the loss of heartfelt goodbyes I linger into the hues I longed to hold as a child. A Sangria sunset always warmed my chill- the way the sky set a scenery of satisfaction overflowing with Blushed memories. Freedom resides in the comfort of loving arms. My arms were born to hold only regret, as my blood races and my body aches for something other than Rouge temptation. I wear shades of lipstick that shatter my dignity... I am nothing but a stalking mourner full of yesterday’s atonement- lost in a tragic moment. Raspberries and Strawberries- Cherries grown in my back yard. They all share the color I have tried to run from since I was burned by the Fire of regret. A Mahogany brick crumbled my soul, as I thirsted for a glass of Merlot- A fever of Garnet ran high in my head, for I am nothing but the color of Red. Red Contest May 29, 2017

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Date: 1/27/2018 11:13:00 AM
I'm re-reading this for the nth time. It is so gorgeous!
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Date: 6/2/2017 6:56:00 AM
I read your thoughts from the get-go, marvelous response to the color RED prompt...the sangria and merlot connections reveal your pleasure well. My favorite line: "I sleep with Ruby dreams..." Congrats, Laura Loo.
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Date: 6/1/2017 4:03:00 AM
- A wonderful winning poems, Laura - Congratulations - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/31/2017 7:20:00 PM
I thought you'd probably win. well-deserved!
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Date: 5/31/2017 5:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Laura ~*
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Date: 5/31/2017 10:13:00 AM
I agree absolutely. You are indeed the color red! You should be the poster girl for the color red. Great job Laura. Congrats and blessings my friend.
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Date: 5/31/2017 10:04:00 AM
This is beyond beautiful, Laura:) sad in its crimson beauty:( congratulations on your trophy win:)
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Date: 5/31/2017 9:25:00 AM
Laura, I think that the color RED is blushing.....fantastic color, imagery, passion, poetry......
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Date: 5/31/2017 4:40:00 AM
This is outstanding luloo! I see why it is a first place trophy winner! Congratulations! 7 ; )
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Date: 5/30/2017 7:30:00 PM
Congrats on this awesome win, Laura!
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Lu Loo
Date: 5/30/2017 7:48:00 PM
thank you White Wolf :)
Date: 5/30/2017 4:37:00 PM
Beautifully written, filled with somber imagery and emotions in reds, Luloo. Congratulations on your Trophy First Place win! Hugs, Sandra
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Lu Loo
Date: 5/30/2017 5:09:00 PM
many thanks sweet Sandra :)
Date: 5/30/2017 3:53:00 PM
Wow, beautifully descriptive poem on the color red, packed with imagery and emotions! Congrats on your top win, Laura Loo. :)
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Lu Loo
Date: 5/30/2017 5:09:00 PM
many thanks lovely Laura :)
Date: 5/30/2017 3:31:00 PM
This poem is SUPERB--emotional, full of imagery--powerful! Congrats on your well-deserved top win, Luloo! Janice
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Lu Loo
Date: 5/30/2017 5:09:00 PM
thank you lovely Janice :)
Date: 5/29/2017 2:32:00 PM
wow, moments weaving a sense of poignancy...pensive, but beautiful all the way, loo.. huggs
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Lu Loo
Date: 5/30/2017 5:08:00 PM
thank you sweet Nette :)
Date: 5/29/2017 11:47:00 AM
This is amazingly beautiful! I felt myself being lifted up by "Sangria Sunset" and "Blushed Memories", "Rouge Temptation" and "Garnet Fever". I imagine you'd win the whole contest with this poem. FAVE.
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Lu Loo
Date: 5/30/2017 5:08:00 PM
thank you Dale :)

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