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I Am Not Alice

I followed you Like Alice And the bunny I fell And fell Deeper Into this dark hole I felt And felt Deeper For you But you were Always Rushing to some place That doesn't include me I tried And tried To stay sane I seen the mad hatter I understood Exactly what I had become I'm sorry but I am not Alice Anymore

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/9/2014 1:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your beautiful; winning poem Amber
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Date: 4/9/2014 11:33:00 AM
Congrats Amber...great content and nice use of the descending verse
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Date: 4/9/2014 11:13:00 AM
Deserved win Amber with a worthy strong poem. // congrats. // paul
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Date: 4/9/2014 10:59:00 AM
Great wining work.Congrats..Sara
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Date: 4/9/2014 9:35:00 AM
Brilliant piece, I love the feel of this one. Congratulations.
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Date: 4/9/2014 9:29:00 AM
A wonderful poem, congrats on the win, Amber
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Date: 4/9/2014 8:51:00 AM
Amber this is a wonderful poem ! Congrats on well deserved top placement !
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Date: 4/9/2014 3:39:00 AM
AMBER, , Congratulations, thank you for supporting my contest...:) LINDA
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Date: 4/9/2014 2:53:00 AM
Amber, CONGRATULATIONS! First place is a wonderful place to be... smiles and hugs Verlena
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