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I Am Not a Warrior

I am not a warrior My skin is pale and soft I am not the kindest spirit My words can hurt you to the bone I am not purest serenity I am fragile and unwhole but my eyes own warm expressions of a giving, caring soul. A soul so weak and strong sensitive and true A conflict , a fine sentiment of what's right or wong to do I am not a warrior My skin is pale and soft I am not the kindest spirit but there's sweetness in my song Unveiled I came to your arms No secret in-between You walked through all my valleys and alleys I have been All I was I have shared with you Who I'm not and who I am You touched my heart You've seen it all Cloaked with gossamer and bare. I am not a warrior My skin is pale and soft I'm not the kindest spirit my words can hurt you to the bone But I am who I am I am human ,I am real I have loved you and embraced you till lips turned cold and still Because doubts created darkness silent teardrops and more fear Like no warrior but with starlight All my battles I would win. Inspired by the song 'Warrior' By Amber

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Tom Woody

Date: 9/13/2023 12:06:00 PM

A non warrior who still manages to win battles. I think I like this person. "I am human, I am real..." take me as I am, she's saying, flaws and all. We accept the challenge:)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 12/31/2016 3:27:00 PM

A truly inspired poem, Charma. The essence of a soul revealed by critical self-examination. You went to a place most try to avoid. Painful truths helps a person to grow beyond their limitations. A stunning, and honest poem. Kudos. Happy New Year. Love and best wishes.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/23/2016 7:32:00 PM

wow, this is quite wonderful and unique, Charma. CAn't believe I ever missed it. I love how you think, lady!!! SEVEN

Paloma P

Date: 12/8/2016 5:49:00 AM

Your ink wields much strength Charmaine, you are a warrior of a particular type, the best kind, a poetess. :)

Paul Callus

Date: 12/4/2016 10:14:00 AM

You are a different kind of warrior, Charm...one who fights for what is right and fair. You 'fight' to keep the peace, always ready to help with kind and encouraging words. Your strength is found within! Such a lovely poem...glad it was inspired by a Maltese singer:) Regards // paul

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/1/2016 6:02:00 PM

Hi Charma, I beg to differ. You are a warrior of a different kind. Your strength comes from the love you have for your fellow man. Excellent write. A without a doubt seven and a fav:-) Alexis

Eileen Manassian

Date: 11/30/2016 4:02:00 PM

You are the best kind of warrior....a warrior with a heart soft and supple. We need to fight for what we believe in. This is an exceptional piece, my dear. You are so talented. I'm in awe...I mean that...truly! Love and hugs

Judy Ball

Date: 11/29/2016 9:37:00 AM

Beautifully done Charmaine. Plainly spoken with great emotion. Loved it. God Bless, JB

Kevin Leake

Date: 11/29/2016 6:19:00 AM

Written like a true warrior Charmaine, Another fine write from you!! Best Wishes Kevin

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/28/2016 8:41:00 PM

If you were a painter, this would be your self portrait, beautiful!

Keith Teaser

Date: 11/28/2016 4:36:00 PM

Love it. it brings colour into a black and white world..

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 11/28/2016 7:33:00 PM

Thanks keith.Welcome to poetrysoup.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/28/2016 4:14:00 PM

in your pen flowed the warrior of grace charmaine excellent piece i pray you have a blessed week pal

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 11/28/2016 7:37:00 PM

Thanks for reading Liam.Prayers are always appreciated.: )

Chris Green

Date: 11/28/2016 2:51:00 PM

Written from a heart that is strong in conviction yet soft in a nurturing way. One who tells it like it is while whispering what can be. There is definitely a conflict in these words but together they create one spirit, one heart and one person who is herself and so much to many other. Beautiful written Charmaine, I could hear this being sung from a balcony overlooking the sea.

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 11/28/2016 7:36:00 PM

Thankyou for reading Chris and for your beautiful comment.

Tim Smith

Date: 11/28/2016 2:39:00 PM

A very beautiful poem Charma. Soft but strong...I really like the refrain...a fave

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 11/28/2016 7:34:00 PM

Thanks for the fave. Tim. Oh you remember Amber..and the song? : ) Glad you liled it.

Tim Smith
Date: 11/28/2016 2:42:00 PM

I had to go listen...now I remember her from Eurovision