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I Am Not a Color

I am not a color I am not a color not black or white or green when you look at me there’s more yet to be seen I am sunshine I am rain I’m ideas formed in my brain. I am thunder I am gloom I am life about to bloom I am freedom I am hope on the days when you can’t cope I am laughter I am song I’m the excuse if things go wrong I am music I am dance I’m the reasons to take a chance I am flora I am sky I am always asking, ‘Why?’ I am not a color That you decide to spray I am the paintbrush… creating my own way. 2/16/2017

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Date: 4/24/2017 1:13:00 PM
I really like this poem. i have to choose a poem about colour for a project, and i might do this. It is daring and different. and i like it.
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Date: 2/26/2017 6:19:00 PM
Love your very creative take on this, Judy. Many congrats on your top-notch win. Great writing! Elaine
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Date: 2/23/2017 1:27:00 PM
Love the repetition. Congratulations Judy! :-)
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Date: 2/22/2017 2:19:00 PM
Yes,this is so true and simple,Judy.Loved it!
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Date: 2/22/2017 1:28:00 PM
Loved your form Judy, congratulations...
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Date: 2/22/2017 12:58:00 PM
A 7 for this VERY creative winning poem, Judy! Janice
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Date: 2/22/2017 12:28:00 PM
Great poem and lovely message, Judy - we are so much more than a color! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/16/2017 4:13:00 PM
Sweet write! :) xomo!
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Date: 2/16/2017 1:37:00 PM
Very lovely, Judy! There is more to people than meets the eye, especially those who opt for originality! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 2/16/2017 12:18:00 PM
I really liked this a lot Judy. The flow of this is smooth and seamless, the rhymes spot on and the message is perfect. Very nicely done
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