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I Am Mountain

mountains watch the oceans there is trust between the two before being proud and tall mountains were underneath it all peaks reaching tearing not at the belly of clouds but at waves shattering glass bliss symphonies in me

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Arum Dusu

Date: 11/26/2023 4:12:00 AM

Very creative...

Mat Ignacio
Date: 11/26/2023 10:30:00 AM

appreciate the time

Brian Sambourne

Date: 11/25/2023 3:02:00 PM

The contrast in form between the 2 verses of your poem, nevertheless connect in the reference to peaks within you. A complex poem that invites multiple reads. Fine writing indeed. Best wishes, Brian

Mat Ignacio
Date: 11/25/2023 5:15:00 PM

thank you for your time and thoughts - best wishes to you as well

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/5/2023 12:14:00 AM

Great contrast between mountains and seas. Blessings.

Mat Ignacio
Date: 11/6/2023 7:51:00 AM

thank you kindly

Paige Hind

Date: 11/4/2023 4:35:00 PM

Very powerful. What amazing images, "the mountain underneath it all" "glass bliss" gorgeous.

Mat Ignacio
Date: 11/4/2023 8:58:00 PM

i appreciate your comments -

John Lawless

Date: 11/4/2023 11:01:00 AM

Very nicely done Mat, I shall reflect on this as I ponder the could on the deep blue horizon

Mat Ignacio
Date: 11/4/2023 8:59:00 PM

thank you for the reply -

Ink Empress

Date: 11/4/2023 4:48:00 AM

“Belly of clouds” thats creative way of painting imagery! Love how you’ve written this! And also “glass bliss symphonies” brilliant! Very descriptive word pairings! Sending you light always

Mat Ignacio
Date: 11/4/2023 8:59:00 PM

to you as well -