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I Am Handing Back the Key To Him

(02/09/2011) I was blue in color and wet the whole part He peeked in to my opened drawer He spotted my infected heart It was shrunk into smaller Next to it, he found a box full of tears In the other corner, he found you feeding my fears He then shooed you to leave my feelings Started to wipe, dry and clean the inside Gave the key back while teasing me and winking He has saved my pride My feelings drawer now in clean beam Sure thing, I’m handing back the key to him!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/28/2011 12:06:00 PM
Always another around the corner my dear. At least you could end it on your terms.
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Date: 9/7/2011 2:27:00 PM
Heartfelt write........thanks for the comment.............George
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Date: 9/3/2011 12:35:00 PM
This is not an uncommon situation you wrote of...many of us have experienced this emotional drain. You painted a poetic picture and then placed the words in a lovely frame! Wonderful write. Gwendolen
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Date: 9/2/2011 6:09:00 PM
His Loss and your new friends like me's gain.... Beautiful poetry my dear.... luv Michael
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Date: 9/2/2011 2:39:00 PM
excellent writing today Dinda
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Date: 9/2/2011 12:07:00 PM
simply lovely lines Dinda .. sweetly eloquent emotions pervades from every word .. touching and tenderly stirring..luv..
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